TAHIRIH DIVINE VOICE RESPONSE!
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From: Starr* S.
Date: Friday, May 9, 2008, 7:24 PM
Subject: Tahirih Divine Voice response!
Reply to: 263419
ID: 260859
Thank you dear Bernadette for your response and suggestion.
I think a lot of those aspects will change when it becomes a full featured movie.
Living Love - Starr*
--- On Fri, May 9, 2008, in msg263419, Jenna Cowles-Ludwig wrote ---
What a lovely video!
I have just one suggestion: I would prefer that the story tell itself through the action of vidoe and narative of the movie - without the contemporary narrative between frames.
That - for me - makes for a more cohesive story. If there must be a contemporary narrative...all at the end would be better in my opinion.
As for the video - the frames, music, and narrative were exquisite!
Thank you for sharing this with us ~
Bernadette
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